Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Flowering Judas: A Story of the Betrayal of Ambiguities
Not only is the idea of betrayal prevalent throughout Flowering Judas, it is also ambiguous. Unable to make opposing beliefs coincide, the characters find themselves lost and ultimately unable to achieve their different ideas of self-actualization and are, in turn, lost in a sea of ambiguity. Likewise, the flowering Judas tree serves as a symbol for the ambiguity experienced by these characters. We first see the Judas tree when Laura rejects a suitor by throwing a flower from the tree at him. The flower, traditionally a sign of love, is, of course, misconstrued by the admirer as a token of Laura’s affection. In addition, this tree, in it self aesthetically pleasing, stands for ultimate betrayal. In her nightmare, Laura eats the sensuous flower from the tree, similar to the way in which Eve eats the forbidden fruit. The flower is a beautiful disguise of personal intent from both receiver and giver alike. Thus, Laura is blinded by her beautiful faiths and cannot understand why she is unable to achieve the perfection she so desires. Furthermore, the name “Judas” refers to the name of Jesus’ disciple who betrayed Him and led Him to death.
(Deep Breath: THE END!)
Laura's Self Betrayal
Re: Re: The Tree of Betrayal
The Mexican revolutionaries follow Braggioni for one of two reasons: a) They don't see the real person, only the image he's projected, or b) Like him or not, following him is the best option for their quality of life and possibly survival.
It can't be b) for Laura, as she has a home elsewhere and as far as we know would be able to return but chooses not to. It's certainly not a) because she knows the true Braggioni and seems to despise him.
You bring up a great point: What led her to this stoicism?
Flowering Judas
It also seems as if Laura believes she betrayed Eugenio, due to her dream where she asks for his hand and all he does is gives her the blossoms of the Judas Tree, and when she eats them and he then calls her a “Murderer” and states that it is his “body and his blood”. So Laura not only feels guilty as if she murdered Eugenio the only person she does not isolate herself from but also uses the Christian theme of taking the Eucharist as an expression of betrayal due to Judas’s actions during the last supper and his betrayal to Jesus.
Tuesday, September 16, 2008
Political Narrative
Braggioni frames himself as a prophet--perhaps a Christ figure--but unlike Christ, Braggioni is a "professional" who "will never die of it"(98). Yet, in the teleological narrative of the revolution, there is an expected apocalyptic endpoint: Braggioni claims that "Some day this world, now so composed and eternal...shall be merely a tangle of gaping trenches, of crashing walls and broken bodies" (100). If he is a prophet or a Christ figure, he must see himself as one of the few surviving "elect spirits destined to procreate a new world" (100).
In the driving political narrative, I had to wonder about Laura's place. She only half-heartedly buys into Braggioni's prophet character. But does she still accept and believe in the teleological pseudo-religious narrative of the revolution? She seems enamoured with her own role: she enjoys playing the spy, the go-between. Certainly, it's glamourous. I think this is the core of her betrayal of Eugenio. As an expat, she doesn't have a vested interest in the revolution in the sense that she doesn't have to put herself in these dangers for the sake of her home country. Yet real patriots like Eugenio are committing suicide in prison. Reading the reference to cannibalism in here, I think Laura can be considered a cannibal in the sense that she is feeding off the narrative of a revolution which is not her own.
On a side note, something to consider for the second part of the course: Did Porter have anxieties about "feeding" off of Mexico? Did she have anxieties about living the glamourous life of an expat and using the stories of the people of a country which was not originally her own?
Flowering Judas
Re: The Tree of Betrayal
Laura "Hannibal" and loss of faith
I understand why he calls her a murderer. It is the connection with the Judas blossoms and Judas betraying Jesus, which lead to his death. Since I don't actually know what the connection between Laura and Eugenio is (there was a line about love, but I read it over and over and I cannot seem to grasp it!) I'm not really sure what the value of the murder line is here. I just understood the connection.
Now the cannibal line... I connected this with the loss of her Catholic faith. How I read the story was that she used to be Catholic, but life and especially the revolution has jaded her, and she doesn't really have faith in anything. She is walking this path that she has chosen for herself, but even though she's not fond of it anymore, she doesn't really care to change it. As I understand, during communion, Catholics take and eat and drink the actually blood and body of Christ. This is a literal view of the last supper where Jesus offers these things to his disciples. Can this be where the cannibal comment came from? Or have I just royally offended people by taking such a literal view myself? I guess we can take this more figuratively. The definition of cannibalism is one that eats others of its own kind. I didn't really see Laura as a life sucker of any sort, rather, just a good woman making the steps of the right path yet not really believing in any of it.
I would love to hear comments on this. Possibly from those that have more knowledge on either Catholicism or cannibalism.
The Tree of Betrayal
The use of Christian imagery in “Flowering Judas” was very interesting. Not only is the image of Judas brought about from the title, but the Tree of Knowledge, the infamous last supper and also the image of Mary Magdalene washing Jesus’ feet are all referenced. It is very rare that the name Judas is not associated with Christ’s betrayer. Simply upon reading the title “Flowering Judas”, I knew some sort of betrayal would take place. After Laura eats the blossoms from her Judas tree she is given some kind of knowledge, she is now awake. Before she eats the tree blossoms Eugenio calls her a prisoner and this is why she must eat them. Just as the Tree of Knowledge frees Adam and Eve from their prison like state, this Judas tree will free Laura as well. After she eats the blossoms Eugenio calls her a murderer because she is eating his body and his blood, which bring about images of the Last Supper. She sees that she has betrayed him. I am a little confused of the order in which these events are presented especially when compared to the biblical references. Judas first attends the last supper, where he breaks bread and drinks of the wine and then he goes on to betray Christ. However, in “Flowering Judas” Laura first betrays Eugenio then eats the Judas blossoms, which make her realize her betrayal. Can anyone clarify this for me? Is the order important?
The image of Mary Magdalene washing Jesus’ feet can be seen in the actions of Braggioni’s wife washing her husbands feet once he has returned to her. She sits as his feet with a basin of water just as Mary Magdalene did with Jesus.
Why Mexico?
Also, I find it interesting that Porter emphasizes, again, the gluttony of her character Braggioni. I think that Porter is once again alluding to Diego Rivera, who is also very politically motivated, and considered an important leader. Other similarities include that Braggioni is insulted by Laura when she is not willing to sleep with him. Also, he indulges in American perfumes, women, and food.
Eugenio
It is clear to Laura that Braggioni is using the revolutionaries for his own profit, and she assists Braggioni in playing the Polish and Rumanian agitators against one another. And though she provides some refief to the prisoners she visits, she is well aware that Braggioni is doing nothing to help them get out. Laura is living well off of Braggioni's money and influence, drinking hot chocolate and enjoying a good job, while the prisoners "entertain themselves with counting cockroaches..." (94).
Laura acknowledges her complicity on page 93: "'It may be true I am as corrupt, in another way, as Braggioni,' she thinks in spite of herself, 'as callous, as incomplete,' and if this is so, any kind of death seems preferable."
So when Eugenio, who is assumed to be dead, appears in her dream, leading her to death, and calls her a murderer and a cannibal, this is her subconscious manifesting its guilt over bringing the prisoners drugs in lieu of real help (and in fact possibly making things worse by offering false hope) and the fact that she is living well in cahoots with Braggioni while they are suffering for his profit.
However, I am suspicious of an even deeper connection between the two. Of all the men Laura interacts with, from her suitors to the agitators to the prisoners, only Eugenio is named. Earlier in the story, Laura's virginity is brought up but never fully explored. I doubt that Porter would make mention of this without it bearing some significance on the ending. So I can't help but wonder if there is some deeper connection between Laura and Eugenio. We never know why Laura is there, in a foreign country, with these people, and Braggioni suggests it is either that she loves someone, or someone loves her. And for all the men that Laura visits in prison, why is Eugenio the one that brings her guilt to the surface?
Not sure if there's something to that or if I'm making connections that aren't there, but I'm very curious about the connection between Laura and Eugenio.
Monday, September 15, 2008
The Martyr
Maria Concepcion
The Human Inability to Reduplicate Christ's Suffering in Perfect Form
Maria Concepcion’s suffering more closely resembles Christ’s than does Rueben’s. Maria suffers the loss of her newborn child after her husband’s betrayal, but rather than curse him and openly bemoan her pitiful state, she secludes herself and attends church with increasing frequency. However, when Reuben is abandoned by his sitter Isabella, he suffers openly, making his burden the burden of his friends.
Though Maria Concepcion suffers nobly, her downfall is ultimately her desire for vengeance. When Maria Rosa returns with Juan, Maria Concepcion’s husband, Maria Concepcion’s jealously and pride erupts and she murders her husband’s lover. In contrast, Rueben’s downfall is his own self-hatred. Rueben outwardly portrays this hate by eating absurd proportions of food, though he can see how this habit is affecting his health. Ultimately, this gluttonous, self-hatred kills Rueben.
While Maria’s flaw may seem worse than Rueben’s, these characters are judged differently by their peers. After the murder, no one speaks out agaist Maria Concepcion, although they all know she killed Maria Rosa. Furthermore, they do not protest when Maria Concepcion claims Maria Rosa’s baby for her own. In the villagers minds, this action seems just, and Maria Concepcion’s pious life seems to right this immense wrong. In contrast, though Rueben’s suffering harms only himself, no one seems to truly remember him. Rather, one man decides to write a book that will ultimately profit the author, and says that he will truly remember the tamales, Rueben’s favorite dish.
Thus, both Maria and Rueben commit fallacies. While Maria suffers inwardly, Rueben suffers outwardly. Maria’s suffering ends in murder while Rueben’s suffering ends in self-inflicted death. Maria’s peers stand up for her, while Rueben’s merely forget him. Thus, both characters cannot suffer silently for other and are ultimately blinded by their own human desires.
Immaculate Conception of "Maria Concepcion"
There are also times when Maria Concepcion is referred to in such a way as the Virgin Mary would be. When the police are questioning the townspeople, they defend Maria Concepcion saying, “She is a woman of good reputation among us, and Maria Rosa was not” (Porter 19). Maria Concepcion, just like Mary, had a good reputation because she was a virgin and had not sinned, unlike Maria Rosa.
Maria Concepcion is robbed of her husband and her child and therefore she takes Maria Rosa’s life and her child as her own. Does she take Maria Rosa’s child simply because she was deprived of her own? Why does she not kill the child along with his mother, since he was conceived by her husband and another woman?
"The Martyr"
O'Connor's Reference: Black lawn jockeys
http://www.lawnjock.com/images/blackjockey1.jpg
It probably should have dawned on me that many (all?) of you would never have seen statuary such as this. We have come some disdance after all.
Puzzled over "The Martyr"
Also, the end of the story left me wondering about Isabel: what happens to her, her reaction (or lack of one) to Ruben's death, etc. I wonder if Porter is purposefully not giving us closeure on that one to make a point or merely because the main thrust of the story was about Ruben and not her.
Sunday, September 14, 2008
"The Martyr" title
Saturday, September 13, 2008
Hungry for Pride: "Maria Concepcion" and "The Martyr"
In "Maria Concepcion," Maria C. is a very prideful woman. We know this because she got married in the church when most other people just got married in the back of the church, "But Maria Concepcion was always as proud as if she owned a hacienda" (4). She is also prideful because even though she is pregnant she is still going in to town to sell fowls. After she finds out that Maria Rosa has run away with Juan, she is very upset and the townspeople reason, "that she was being punished for her pride. They decided that this was the true cause for everything: she was altogether too proud. So they pitied her" (9). Juan also likes how he feels when he has two women, and he boasts about it. Pride also comes into play when Lupe decides not to "ruin" Maria Concepcion by telling on her because, "it was even sweeter to make fools of these gendarmes who went spying on honest people" (19).
On the other hand, there is Ruben in "The Martyr" and his complete lack (in my opinion) of pride. He is lustful after Isabel, and doesn't care who knows it. He also loses his pride in his work and is unable to finish it.
Another thing that I found interesting was how food plays into this idea of pride. In "Maria Concepcion," making food for your man becomes a big issue. She takes so much pride in making food for Juan that when she is pregnant she still goes to his worksite to bring food to him, and she looks down on Givens who does not have a woman to make food for him, "She stood and regarded Givens condescendingly, that diverting white man who had no woman of his own to cook for him, and moreover appeared not to feel any loss of dignity in preparing his own food" (7). Also (I may be stretching here but humor me) Juan stops eating her food (Givens says, "Leave his food. The others will eat it" (7).) and she loses some of her pride because he runs off with the honey girl and the townspeople start to pity her, but then when he returns part of their cover is how she makes him food and magically her pride returns (he doesn't even seem upset that Maria R has died, which is a whole other post). She also seems to take pride in making the goat's milk for the baby at the end.
Food also becomes intertwined with the issue of pride in "The Martyr." Ruben loses his pride so he starts to eat a lot, and it is his love of food that causes his heart attack. He also eats only the best food. I also find it interesting that in her letter Isabel says, "I am going away with someone who will never allow me to cook for him..." (34), and this seems to be a source of pride for her.
What do you all make of this? Am I stretching the food/pride connection, or is there something there?
Friday, September 12, 2008
nature vs. nurture
Perception
My feeling is that it symbolizes the disconnect between Mr. Head and what's happening in the city. He speaks with "authority" because he's made a few trips to the city, but really he's lived a secluded life in the country. For him, it's easy to use a word like "nigger" because he doesn't have any real experience with black people, as far as we can tell. His line to Nelson on page 213, "A six-month-old child don't know a nigger from anybody else," seems meant to overcompensate for his own lack of knowledge/experience in the city. (In a backward way, it also makes a point in favor of tolerance, that discrimination is nurtured, not innate.)
Mr. Head's understanding of black people comes from an image in his mind, and the statue is itself an image. It doesn't talk back, like the servants on the train. It doesn't give directions. It doesn't get hurt when you run into it. Interacting with black people, especially in their neighborhood, not his, is shattering Mr. Head's image, and he's terrified of this. He's so terrified that he cowardly denies his own son.
As the story progresses, his one desire is to get back to the confines of his own familiar territory. And, we can presume, back to the comfort of his stereotypes that won't be challenged in his rural home.
What is an "Artificial Nigger"
As for how all this rambling ties in with the statue and redemption, I'm at a loss. Any comments or help would be appreciated.
O'Connor's A.N. Post
Mercy and the Innocence of Children
In terms of appearances, the child looks very similar to his grandfather, “They were grandfather and grandson but they looked enough alike to be brothers and brothers not too far apart in age…” (251). Once the characters are in the city, the grandfather is frightened, but the child acts coolly and with indifference towards the situation. Furthermore, the grandfather looses the bagged lunch and the child chastises him for this loss. Above all, the grandfather pulls a childish prank on his grandson by hiding in an alley way while the child sleeps. As a result, the grandfather leads the grandson to peril.
The themes of mercy and childish innocence are brought to the forefront in the presence of the artificial nigger. However, the way in which the two characters relate to this statue is very different. In the presence of the artificial nigger, the grandfather, “looked like an ancient child” and the grandson, “like a miniature old man” (269). While the grandfather feels the action of mercy take place, the grandson seems to forsake God by stating “I’m glad I’ve went once, but I’ll never go back again!” thus implying that the old can be innocent and the young can deny themselves mercy.
Lessons in the Artificial Nigger
Determined to teach Nelson a lesson in the city, Mr. Head leaves him while he is sleeping. It is immature and spiteful of Mr. Head to leave Nelson then scare him by banging on the trashcan to get his desired reaction. This leads to Nelson's only weak point in the story when he does express his need for his grandfather when the old woman is threatening to call the police on him. Instead of taking the leadership role that he is trying to hollow out for himself, Mr. Head refuses to take responsibility and leaves Nelson to deal with it on his own, immediately ruining any respect that Nelson may have had for him.
When they finally reach the train again, it is Mr. Head himself coming away with the stronger lesson. For the first time in the story, he sees himself as he truly is, a petty man that's only value comes from his grandson's mercy. Before he thought he was a pretty smart guy that had every right to teach Nelson about the world because he had been to the city three times. Nelson's only lesson is that he can not depend on his grandfather. It is Mr. Head that has the epiphany that the meaning of life is the mercy and forgiveness of others. Before this trip to the city, pride had always been most important to him. The realization that mercy and forgiveness, that of his grandson and God, are the most important things completes his life.
Mercy and The Artificial Nigger
This also brings up another interesting topic of how is Nelson left in this story? Both Mr. Head and Nelson have undergone a sense of transformation in this story, but while Mr. Head has improved and felt mercy, Nelson has not and some of his "childhood innocence" is gone.
I am also interested in who has the power to bestow mercy. While they are looking at the statue, they feel mercy, but this mercy seems to come from a mystical power. Does Nelson have the power to bestow mercy on Mr. Head because he is the one that has been wronged? How is mercy transferred from person to person?
Us and Them: Mercy Hate
I thought it was interesting that this sculpture brought them together. After being denied by his grandfather, Nelson wants to stay in the city. It isn't until they see the sculpture in this wealthy neighborhood that they feel their familial bond again and return to the country together. That was the strangest part of this story for me: is the artificiality of the title the contructed otherness that is necessary to hold traditional groups of people together? In that sense, all race relations are based on artificiality: like Nelson says, the black population is not "black," but rather "tan." Similiarly, the special curtain needed to segregate the dining car on the train is a perfect example of artificial ways of labeling and dividing groups of people for the so-called necessary stability of society.
So to whom does the text refer with "another's victory"? Has the African American population triumphed in the segregated part of the city as well as in this white, wealthy neighborhood in the sense that they've been made into art? That sounds pretty sick, but I'm at a loss as to read it.
But my questions concerned the nature of Mr. Head and Nelson themselves. They are, obviously, what Mrs. Turpin would call white trash. They share their private frustrations with complete strangers on the car, and clearly have a "country bumpkin" quality. So when they find themselves in the wealthy neighborhood, is it really the sculpture that "dissolves their differences"? Or is it the presences of the sculpture in an upper-class part of the city where "they ain't got enough real [African Americans]...They got to have an artificial one." In a sense, I think this folk art interpretation of an African American articulates black otherness to the point where it also articulates the otherness of white trash. Mr. Head and Nelson find themselves in "common defeat" in a wealthy, white neighborhood. They realize suddenly that there are actually two Other groups which they do not understand, and to which they do not belong: both the black community, and the wealthy, white community.
Control and Dependency
Mercy in "The Artificial Nigger"
On agony: Mr. Head's denial of Nelson to the toppled woman plunges him into guilt. At the sight of the boy's eyes, which are "triumphantly cold," with "no light in them, no feeling, no interest, " Mr. Head despairs, knowing "what man would be like without salvation." (229) Mr. Head is completely disillusioned, with himself and his ability, just as Nelson is with Mr. Head - this is agony, "given in strange ways" to Nelson, and by knowledge of what he's done to the boy, a realization unto itself to Mr. Head.
On humility: Mr. Head all but prostrates himself before the fat man walking the dogs, his desperation like that of "someone shipwrecked on a desert island" (228). This event is a stark contrast to the proud Mr. Head at the beginning of the story, who is in constant (rather humorous) competition with his grandson. Mr. Head feels "entirely confident that he [can] carry out the oral mission of the coming day" (211), the confidence amounting to rather a lot of hubris for such a small task.
Nelson is humbled as well by his trip to the city. It is a point of contention between the grandfather and grandson on just how many times Nelson has been to the city; he insists this is his second trip "because he had been born there." (211) This claim persists throughout the story until, in its closing words, Nelson lays off, muttering, "'I'm glad I've went once, but I'll never go back again!'" (231) This change in Nelson proves a counterpoint to Mr. Head's own journey towards mercy; he is not the transgressor, he is the victim, but is humbled all the same.
On salvation: The trip to the city is the launching pad for Mr. Head and Nelson to better understand the nature of sin. Nelson imagines the city sewers as connected to the entrance of hell (220); Mr. Head describes the city as a "nigger heaven," the term rife with implications as to just who Mr. Head thinks belongs there (222); and, as they disembark from it in their town once again, the train "disappear[s] like a frightened serpent into the woods" (231), the instrument of temptation, though given into once, scared off by the man and the boy who have seen the light. When Mr. Head realizes that "he was forgiven for sins from the beginning of time . . . until the present, when he had denied poor Nelson" (231), he sees that the agony of all those sins, and the humility that they cause in him, are in fact just entry fees to heaven. "[S]ince God loved in proportion as He forgave, he felt ready at the instant to enter Paradise." (231)
So in fact Mr. Head's confidence in completing a moral mission is not unjustified, just unfocused - both he and Nelson escape the city with a better approximation of sin, and what transformation they must undergo to relieve themselves of that burden, to accept God's mercy and join Him in heaven.
Artificial NIgger
I also noticed within the story that when Nelson and Mr. Head are about to leave for the city, Nelson has a lot of opinions and hatred for “Negros,” however when he actually sees one on the train he does not even recognize that the man is “black” rather he refers to him as “tan”. This was interesting to me because it shows that people do not inherit hate like so many people in this time believed they did such as Mr. Head who was shocked that he could not tell that the man was “black,” but it show that children are ignorant and learn hatred from their family which I admire O’Conner for portraying that idea within this story that, hatred is learned.
Racism in "The Artificial Nigger"
Thursday, September 11, 2008
"The Artificial Nigger"
Another idea which caught my attention is how Mr. Head is described as having a “youthful expression” and Nelson’s appearance is “ancient” (O’Connor 212). This is interesting because it is Mr. Head who acts childish. He is the one wakes after his grandson; he is the one who gets lost in the city; he is the one who disowns his own grandchild. He is also stubborn like a child. Even though Nelson has decided to forgive his grandfather by the end of the story, it is Mr. Head who does not even ask for forgiveness. He simply accepts what he has done to Nelson and that is all. Just as Nelson is stubborn when it comes to the number of times he has been to the city, Mr. Head is stubborn in his own way. However, it is Nelson who changes in the end. Nelson acknowledges that he has only been to the city once. It is as if Nelson and Mr. Head have switched places, just as their physical descriptions portray them.
I found Mr. Head to be a very selfish individual. He takes his grandson into the city, I believe, for the sole purpose of showing him that he does not know as much as he thinks he knows. He is not taking Nelson into the city as a treat, as some kind of family vacation. Instead, he is doing it to prove a point. Then on the train it seems as though Mr. Head has no sense of common courtesy; he speaks loudly even though it is still very early in the morning and many people on the train are still asleep. And again, Mr. Head proves is selfish behavior when he denies Nelson as his family. He says this simply because once he learns that he will be held responsible for the old woman’s injuries he does not want anything to do with the situation. Therefore, without any regard for his grandson’s emotions he simply disowns him.
Ghost References in "The Artificial Nigger"
For example, when Nelson and Mr. Head are waiting for the train O’Conner employs a ghostly simile: “Both the old man and the child stared ahead as if they were awaiting an apparition” (252). Also, when the two get on the train they sit next to a man who is described as having, “a pale ghost-like face” (253). In fact, the words “pale ghost-like face” are repeated two times in this paragraph. Later on during the train ride, Nelson starts to look out the window of the train but he stops because, “the face in the window stared out at him, gray but distinct (258). Nelson is called back to this moment when he is walking through the black neighborhood: “The sneering ghost he had seen in the train window and all the foreboding feelings he had on the way returned to him…” (262). No more similes or references to ghosts are made after this. I do not know what O’Conner is trying to do here other than create an uncanny tone. Maybe I caught on to something that is not supposed to be significant, but I felt as though her continual use of ghost references might lead somewhere.
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Oh Mercy... I guess I'll take it
The dynamic between the grandfather and grandson is absolutely beautiful. It is a perfect example of the wise and the ignorant... wait, which one is which? We are given descriptions of the characters as Mr. Head expressing youth in his face and demeanor while Nelson has an ancient look. Nelson tries to rebel against his grandfather constantly, which cause Mr. Head to react by over-compensating wisdom to the point where he blatantly embellishes. Mr. Head also seems to push Nelson into racism as a form of control over him. Not just racism, I guess, but fear altogether. This could just be a form of projection of Mr. Head's own fears, but I think he's taking it one step further and adding control to it.
Back to the mercy theme... The city proves to be overwhelming even for the "experienced" Mr. Head and he is brought down to human form there. The opening paragraph in the story personifies all his things as if he was running some sort of kingdom (as if he was God himself!) and it isn't until he fails in the city that he realizes he really doesn't have control over anything. I think God gave him mercy by letting him get away with abandoning his grandson (and maybe even showed him mercy from trying to act as God) - or at least that is how Mr. Head sees it. Really, it is Nelson that shows him mercy. Nelson has the upper hand in many ways and "forgives" Mr. Head by contributing to their common love of bashing on the "Negroes." It is a very sick thing that ultimately brings them back together, and I don't really know how to feel about it except, well, sick.
I think the readers of the story, and even the background characters (the women that Nelson has a run in with) pity Nelson. He follows, reluctantly at some times, a false hero. Mr. Head believes he is entitled to have Nelson's devotion and hates when he is questioned because every time Nelson questions, it points out all the flaws in Mr. Head's theories. Mr. Head is a hero only in his own mind, and he tries to structure his surroundings accordingly.
Does Mr. Head learn his lesson after he is granted mercy? Maybe. He sees it as a divine mercy, so he really only repents to God, and doesn't even bother to apologize to Nelson. In fact we only see that Nelson has changed in the end, because he makes the statement that he's only been to the city once, and no longer includes his birth. He feels humbled by the experience, and decides to depend on his grandfather for further guidance. This could count as falling under God's mercy of Mr. Head. Everything in the end was restored to its former order, and they get to rid themselves of the experience of the city.
Since I don't think that Mr. Head really changes his ways after he thinks he is granted mercy from God, I'm not sure I buy the fact that mercy was even granted. I think the feeling Mr. Head is having more than anything is intense guilt for what he has done. I'm basing this opinion mainly on the definitions of mercy. "Compassion" is used a lot in the definitions and I'm not sure I see it anywhere, except from maybe the old woman who gets her ankle broken by Nelson, and the "dark" woman who gives them directions to the station. It's a stretch for mercy, but I guess I'll take it!
Benefits of Class Discussion ("Magic")
Commitment
My first interpretation was that things can be taken away, but it is only theft if she places personal value on them. Therefore, there can only be one thief--herself. After revisiting the story a few times, I would apply this to every facet of her life, not just things.
The protagonist has commitment issues all the way around, as do those around her. By engaging in casual affairs with unavailable men, she not only avoids "traditional" relationship commitments, but she also protects herself from having her heart broken. This is symbolically addressed via her comment about never locking doors "on some principle of rejection in her that made her uncomfortable in the ownership of things... she had never lost a penny by theft."
The word that stands out for me is rejection. She has never lost a penny not because they haven't been taken from her--they have--but because if she commits to nothing she can lose nothing, most glaringly in her relationships.
Magic again
At first I wasn't sure if there was prostitution in this story. I caught on near the end of the story when the men are asking for Ninette. I wrote "brothel?" next to the paragraph and continued reading. The second time I read it I can definitely see that the story this serving woman is telling is about a brothel and a fight between one of the prostitutes and the madam. In the beginning where the serving woman, our narrator, says "maybe you don't know what is a fancy house?" she is talking about a brothel. Madam Blanchard is a wealthy woman so she knows wealthy houses but she wouldn't know about a brothel. The madam in the story is also paying Ninette though Ninette does not seem to be a servant. In fact she is a prostitute working in the house. She gets paid for the male visitors she gets. When I first read male visitors, I innocently thought her male friends were just visiting her. Of course, when she is accused of stealing from them it let's the readers know that when the men visit it has something to do with money.
The second thing that jumped out at me is the violence in this story. There is violence in ever part of it. The relationship between the madam and the prostitute is obviously violent since they were known to beat each other up with bottles. However, there is even an undertone of violence between our narrator and Madam Blanchard when she combs her hair too hard. Even the end is violent. Ninette is brought back to the brothel against her will through Magic. Forcing someone into something against their will is innately violent.
Why are the two biggest themes in this story prostitution and violence? Are we to learn that promiscuity is evil through this comparison. Prostitution is the oldest profession and was long accepted as one of the only ways women could be independent. However, prostitution is violent. The prostitutes are owned by the madams and hardly have any rights of their own. Once men pay for a woman there is little he can't do to her. Is Porter telling us that this is a vicious circle that, in the end, can't be solved? There is violence through the whole story but when Ninette runs away she has the chance to escape it. Instead she doesn't escape and is brought back to the violent life through magic. Violence can't end.
Bringing Theft and Magic together
I decided to connect both of these stories with the concept of race and class. Both stories had a black servant of some sort that started out or ended up being a "plot point" in the story. Meaning, they brought the story forward in some way. In Theft, the janitress calls attention to the character of the woman, and makes us question everything we've learned about her so far. In some ways, she could be the woman's "revelation" because she actually accuses HER of theft, based on the fact that she has more than other people and she's beautiful (and white) so that mean she has an obligation to give to those less fortunate. We don't really concentrate on her character though, and even when she appears we just look more toward the main woman in the story.
In Magic, the servant girl is the teller of the story. It is her alone that we put trust in if the story is actually true or not. There is no outside narrator, so she is the only authority on the story she's telling. The only instance where we get an outside voice is when her Madame asks for more of the story. It is very interesting looking at the story from the point of view of the servant because I don't know her reasoning for telling the story. We know she's telling it to her Madame, but why? Why are we hearing it? Is there a lesson that I'm missing here?
So far, we haven't dealt with race in this class except when it pertains to the main characters. We have, however, encountered class issues (white trash especially). How does race change our perceptions? How does it change our perceptions when they are the moral voice and the upper classes are the fallen ones?
you can't allways get what you want
Ownership is also explored in Magic with Madame Blanchard and Ninett's relationship. Ninett is basically enslaved, comes back due to the curse and is "happy to be there" it seems so out of place because Blanchard has not right to own Ninett, and the justification for her staying at the brothel makes no sense to me. So the story leaves me with the question, "what is so magical about being forced to return to a brothel, where you get beaten?"
Theft
Magic Post
Magic and Theft
I found some issues with voice in Theft as well. Since the woman in this story is not named, this makes her into a "lesser" character. I am wondering what sort of comment Porter is trying to make with this. Could it be tied into her femininity somehow? Is the character trying to seek out a confirmation of her femininity from the men she sees, and so she is not yet truly an independent or true woman yet because she lets the men in her life define who she is? Is she trying to make this story relatable to women everywhere? Also, the jaintress does not get a proper name either. I find this very interesting. What is Porter saying about women and their voices in these two stories?
Theft
In fact, the woman does not really want Camilo to wear his hat in the rain, or to pay for her, but she senses that it would be pointless to refuse him because his pride would be wounded. Roger, similarly, offers her a cab, and she accepts as a concession to his very different brand of pride: he's the sort of fellow who can afford a new hat, so he's not embarrassed to protect the one he has from the rain. He puts an arm around her familiarly, but then announces his apparently impending engagement. Bill whines about $10 a week alimony, but has just aquired a decorative rug for $95. Similarly, he was paid $700 for his play (even though it didn't run), but refuses to help the woman out with her $50 share for writing. (She apparently has contributed a scene to the script). In none of these cases is the woman assertive: she won't betray Camilo's gallantry and pride, she won't betray Roger's easy, flirtatious friendship, and she won't demand her payment from Bill. When the letter writer announces the end of the affair, we can probably assume that she will not take any action. She has been left again, with little more than a purse to show for it, although she has maintained her untethered, modern, sexual freedom as a woman free to come and go as she chooses. Whether she finds her situation glamourous or not, however, seems grimly ambiguous at the end of the story.
Magic
Theft
Although the janitress did take the purse first, she implies that she is not the thief but the woman is because she refused to let a young girl have the purse when it would do her good. When looking at it this way, the woman is the thief for keeping the purse for herself when it could help someone else.
So who is the thief? I would say that the thief is the woman. The first half of the story is only there to prove that it is the woman that is the thief. At first I wasn't sure why the first half of the story was included at all. However, it shows the reader that, although the woman is a likeable enough character on the outside, she is the thief of the story. She has these relationships with these men but she is stealing something from each of them. She takes Camilo's dignity because she makes him pay for her when they are both poor and expects him to wear his hat in the rain because it is the classy thing to do even though it will ruin the hat. Roger pays for most of the taxi ride they both take. She asks Bill for $50 even though he has just finished telling her that he is running low on money because of his other expenses and paying for his lifestyle. Each of these men give her money but none of them get anything back. She doesn't seem to have any relationship with them beyond friendship. However she expects them to give her money. She is actually robbing them. Therefore, the woman is the thief of the story.
Magic
Another question I had was who is Madame Blanchard? The story is addressed to her and since she has Madame as a title she is obviously of some class. At first I thought she might be elderly and unable to take care of herself because the woman telling the story is combing her hair and talking as if to fill the silence. However, Madame Blanchard is interested in the story because she asks "[t]hen what?" Why would a woman of class be interested in a story from her servant about another madam that is cast in a violent and evil light?
Although I enjoyed the story I wasn't sure why it was told. I was wondering what everyone thought about this. Why is this story told?
Theft
Tuesday, September 9, 2008
Gender in Theft
Monday, September 8, 2008
Comment about Bevel's Mother
I was wondering what you guys thought about her talking like this to her son. Also, she does not reply to Bevel/Harry’s remarks about ‘counting’. I find it interesting how she does not reply to his statement, acting to discount what he has said immediately and with finality. I was also interested in O’Conner’s focus on the shapes that his mother creates…she is almost portrayed as fleeting or inhuman. Her body is described as a silhouette that “tiptoed lightly,” (170) her face is described as a “pale oval,” (171) and when she leaves only the outline of her figure is described. Let me know what you guys think. I wonder if O’Conner is commenting on the effects of alcohol on her presence.
the wart hog from hell
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Sunday, September 7, 2008
Concept of white trash 9/07/08
Does the message in the story mean it's better off to be dead than to be white trash? In Mrs. Turpin's mind, she'd probably say so. She would rather be black (and respectable!) then be white trash. It isn't even being poor that the characters in this story mind, it's having a "good disposition."
I can't help but wonder what this "good disposition" really means and if today we call it something else. Does it have to do with education? Politics? Religion? Can we draw similarities in the constant bantering of conservatives in primetime talk shows? Why is there such a dislike for the white trash? My entire life I let this term slide off my shoulder because I just assumed it was another stereotype that my mom tried so desperately to get rid of in my mind.
My interpretation of Mrs. Turpin's revelation was that she wasn't all that different from the other classes. Even as she was thinking and labeling the other classes, she notes that eventually they all muddle together. The "ugly" girl that attacked her probably targeted her because she "knew" that Mrs. Turnip would say one thing and think another. That is why Turpin said she felt like the girl knew her and had a specific reason for not liking her. I found Turpin's remarks in the waiting room much more offensive than the white trash lady, mainly because everything she was saying was sugar-coated and insincere. She was always thinking something else, and usually had some critical, judgmental thought about the ugly or white trash women. In fact, all she did was judge and criticize.
I'm not really sure if I understood the end of "Revelation." Was it that Mrs. Turpin was rationalizing her anger and frustration with feeling like she wasn't as good of a person as she thought? Was her "revelation" reversed? It seemed to me that she ended on the conclusion that no matter what happened, she was still right. Any thoughts?
Pigs in "The River"
In Mrs. Connin's "The Life of Jesus Christ for Readers Under Twelve," Bevel marvels at the pictures, especially "one of the carpenter driving a crowd of pigs out of a man" (160). A little bit of googling ("jesus, pigs") leads me to believe that this is in reference to Matthew 8.28-34. Briefly, Jesus comes across two possessed men; they ask Him if he intends to torture them before their time. Looking to a herd of pigs in the distance, "the devils besought him, saying, If thou cast us out, suffer us to go away into the herd of swine. And he said unto them, Go. And when they were come out, they went into the herd of swine: and, behold, the whole herd of swine ran violently down a steep place into the sea, and perished in the waters." Biblical text from here.
Speaking of pigs: the shoat that Bevel releases from the pen is established to look like Mr. Paradise, the pig "long-legged and hump-backed and part of one of his ears . . . bitten off" (159), and Mr Paradise "a huge old man who sat like a humped stone," his hat turned up "to expose a purple bulge on his left temple" (163), what Mrs. Connin tells us is ear cancer (159). But the pig doesn't just look like Mr. Paradise - to Bevel, Mr. Paradise (in his rush to save Bevel from the river) is "something like a giant pig bounding after him" (171).
To draw a direct parallel between "The River" and the story in Matthew, Mr. Paradise seems to be representative of the pigs driven of the possessed men who scare the swine herd into the sea, causing their deaths, and Bevel himself representative of the herd. I think there's merit to the interpretation; the demons of Matthew are distant from God by virtue of their nature, and Mr. Paradise puts no stock in the words of Reverend Bevel Summers. According to Mrs. Connin, "'He always comes [to the river] to show he ain't been healed" (159).
However, the parallel connection seems a little too prosaic for O'Connor, and under a microscope it doesn't hold up. Who was the Jesus that drove Mr. Paradise to the river? What man was Mr. Paradise cast off from? I don't have a more satisfying interpretation, only a lot more questions, the first of which is, with whom do we sympathize in this story? Bevel's a liar and a thief, though only four or five; his parents shirk him so that they can have a good time; the Reverend is perhaps a hack. Maybe you sympathize with Mrs. Connin, but I like Mr. Paradise. Does that make him the Jesus of Matthew 8.28-34, or is O'Connor asking for a reinterpretation of that story to understand her own? I think that it's probably the second, but I haven't been able to figure out just how to justify that yet.
Mrs. Turpin's Faith
What is white trash
At one point during the story Mrs. Turpin addresses the woman as white trash; she does not say white-trashy mother, or white trash woman, she says, “Everybody laughed except the girl and the white trash” (O’Connor 643). It is as if Mrs. Turpin does not feel this woman is even good enough to be considered a woman; she is simply just as her label describes, white trash.