Brad - Response

Since the day we talked about our re-reading of "Artificial Nigger," I've been paying attention to your paper topic in the other stories. I like how you've incorporated the question of O'Connor's opinions of her portrayal of country vs. city in her works. You've made a great connection between O'Connor's thoughts on the "ever-diminishing South" and her depiction of the "city" representing change. I know that there is a clear difference in the settings of O'Connor's city, and O'Connor's country, but I was wondering if you've thought about looking at the weather and the lighting within those settings? "Artificial Nigger" paints a vivid picture through the sun and the moon, and the contrasts between light and dark. They are completely different in the city than they are in the country, and I noticed that it definitely reflects the characters' moods. I know it's late in the game, but I thought this might help you explain the characters' attitudes towards the "big city." Good luck with the rest of your paper!!!

Response - Bethany

Bethany! I loved your presentation! It is clear that you know exactly what you want to talk about in your paper, and the printout of your outline was extremely helpful. Your approach regarding Porter's autobiographical voice through Miranda's character is really interesting, especially since the question has been raised regarding O'Connor's embodiment of her characters/narrators. What you have so far sounds great, and it's very different from the rest of the class. Good luck with completing your paper!!!